When the Greater Twin Cities United Way and the Star Tribune asked local elementary students to write essays about the "Power of We," hundreds of students in grades three through five heard the call. They told us how, by banding together rather than working alone, we can accomplish everything from keeping a neighborhood park clean to preventing bullying to solving homelessness.
Some of the students wrote about things they and their families have done, such as collecting food for shelters, raking leaves for elders or helping other students with their homework. Others wrote about what they hope to accomplish -- with a little help from their friends, of course.
"We can all make a difference in the world," wrote one fifth-grader, "but think how much of a difference we could make if we worked together."
First-place winner, Shrey G. Pothini, will receive a $500 savings bond. The nine runners-up -- Leah Brandt, Daniyal Khan, Anna Curtler, Amya Moore, Olivia Murphy, Morgan Duvall, Antiquita Flint, Jack MapelLentz and Adel Sabri -- will each receive $100 savings bonds.
Here are the winning essays:
SHREY G. POTHINI
Grade 3, Harriet Bishop Elementary, Savage
Kids don't always feel like they have so much power, even though they do. When children work together they can help others more than grown-ups. Kids can use their birthday parties to collect items to donate instead of presents. They can ask businesses to help with the collections, like I did. A business might help a kid because children sound cute, but that business might not help a grown-up who asks. Also, kids sometimes have better ideas than grown-ups for helping others. If children work together, they can make a huge difference in the world -- before they turn into grown-ups.
AMYA MOORE
Grade 5, Birch Grove Elementary, Brooklyn Park
A magnificent way we can change our community is by helping those who get bullied. People are getting bullied and, sadly, it is increasing. We could help those people by telling positive things about them, and tell them to ignore negative things that bullies tell them. A lot of people feel bad about themselves, like me unfortunately, but be by their side. Remember, if you ever see someone being bullied, help them, and comfort them. This is a great way we could help our people in the community.
Daniyal Khan
Grade 3, Meadowbrook Elementary, Golden Valley
My name is Daniyal Khan. I go to school at Meadowbrook Elementary. I have a friend in my class who has Down syndrome. His name is Sam. Sam likes to laugh and smile. My friends Ruby and Sophia ask Sam to play with us. We don't want Sam to feel lonely. We play on the monkey bars and climb on the rock wall. If Sam falls, we always help him up. We like to play with Sam because it is good to do things with someone who is not exactly like you. It is interesting and fun, and he likes us too.